Poetry Challenge Monthly Prompt and Poetry Writing Tips.

Here is my Poetry submission for the June prompt:

the thought which brings chaos to me,

is the thought i spread,

but with an illusion of stability.

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And now for the rewrite aiming for more concrete words:

the thought which brings the disorder like the abrupt heavy rain,

is the thought i spread like the erupting volcano spreads the dust,

but with an illusion of stability.

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Which one is better and which one i like more:

In my personal opinion use of concrete words depends upon the mood of your poem, for example if you want to express your love through the poem using the concrete words will be very effective, on the other hand if you want your poetry cold and confusing then i wont go for concrete words.

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Poetry Challenge Monthly Prompt and Poetry Writing Tips